BAR
BAR
Week 3
Welcome Builders
Welcome to Week 3 of Builders Corp. 4.
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This week we have invited back our Builders Corp. 3. winner Ejvind11 to judge the following task. He will take everything he's learned to formulate his own critiques on your builds. Eliminating someone in the process.
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Your third task requires you to create a bar following one of the following prompts.
Fantasy/Sci-fi/Modern
Good luck builders!
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cover photo built by Ejvind11 (.COM)
Congratulations
..Raymond
Congratulations Builders! You have successfully completed your third task. A huge thanks to Ejvind11 for guest judging this week. We whole-heartedly trust his judgement and couldn't think of anyone more qualified to judge this week. Please see the progress page for your individual ranking. Thanks!
We will see you soon!
Greetings from Hab-waii
Deathbrand
Its annoying how good you can build by just leaving big spaces free of small details. Your style of detailing in small compact areas and leaving big blank spaces nearly free of details is something true to your style, and I love it! All though the details are used sparingly, the few details you have blow me away. I especially love the window, the bar cabinets, and my god the use of the hole in the wall combined with the diner window, stunning. The only thing I can really touch on is the stair like shape the right side of the room has, it could have been easily been smoothed out with the use of some triangular blocks. Otherwise, great job!
EarCandy
My favorite part of this room is definitely the shape of it. I love the small seating area by the counter and the jukebox area. Also, the roof of the bar is beautifully done. And then there is the textures and colours. I don’t know if you just took a chance with the use of the wood, or if it something you just feel familiar or safe building with, but I’m not sure it totally worked. I mean I like the idea of wood being used in a modern bar, but then again it doesn’t feel right. Like the warm and cosy feel you get from the wood, doesn’t match the hard white marble and brick used in the build. The window shows a hard and gritty outside world, and a small wooden bar doesn’t correlate with that. Although I feel like you missed out on the theme, the build still shows a beautiful and cute little bar! Keep it up.
Riverfire
I’m absolutely in love with this room! The hanging wires, the window/tv showing the city outside, the studio camera pole sticking out, all gorgeous details. The use of light and shadows together with the details creates a certain mood. Good job! The problem I have with this room is how much it doesn’t fully follow the task at hand. You managed to create a beautiful shell, but I feel like you missed out on the bar aspect. I mean you placed a few chairs and a counter with drinks on it on the right side of the room. I need a subject!
..Raymond
This room is alright. I’m joking, this is by far my favorite room of the week. The structure, the choice of colours, the usage of untraditional furni, I mean come on! I think we all know how hard it is to build with circular furni in Habbo, but with the use of the circular stage combined with the hovering sign you somehow managed to do it so elegantly. Nice. To me this build is almost perfect, the only parts I dislike are the overhanging arena divider, I mean I can see right through your build! I would have tried stacking a few more on top to stop the transparency. Also the cash patch glitching on the floor makes my toes curl up. Congratulations!
janicetale
You can definitely read that this room is a modern bar. I love some of the smaller details such as the split wine on the floor, the lights under the bar and the chairs are beautifully done. The use of the limo middle is very clever! However, the overall room falls flat. It simply feels and looks too plain, the lighting you placed had so much potential to make such a moody feel to the room. One last thing, do be careful that your rooms don’t end up to “boxy”, try making them feel more organic by adjusting the shape/structure of the room.
odeyasH
The attention to detail in this room is really something! You have managed to create a beautiful old school, fantasy tavern with this build. Magnificent. There is so many intricate details that I want to highlight, like the use of the champagne tower, the bobba juice rack and the little chocolate mouse nipping away on the cheese. Just be careful you aren’t too generous with the details, too many small details tend to blend together and create a messy look. That being said, the details are definitely the saving grace of this build. Because the shape, well it lacks a bit. The room needs some walls, it just feels like a black void to the right of the bar. The ship side corners in the floor stick out too much and destroys the shape of the room. Also, the roof could have been easily fixed with some wooden stages. To me these mistakes makes the overall room feel rushed, like you build the bar area first and kind of half-assed a shell around it.
Qamel.
Overall, I really enjoy this room. It has a very minimal style of the bar with all the added details and it looks great! I love how you added the gold strips in the tile blocks even though its such a small detail it really adds to the modern theme of the room. Although the walls do feel too bulky and doesn't help with the boxy layout of the room. The details in the bar area are stunning, I especially like the hanging wine glasses as well as the chairs. But, I really wish you didn't make it so symmetrical on the shelves.
Queenension
I see you took a chance with an exterior build, and I must say I really enjoyed it! You made a very convincing sci-fi-ish bar with appropriate details. The overall structure of the build is exquisite. Love the balconies and different overhangs. Nice! However, even though it’s a beautiful room, it doesn’t scream bar. The bar seems to be a very tiny part of the build, like a small add on. I see you tried to incorporate a bit more of the bar aspect with the rooftop acting as a seating area, and for me it worked out. But, if I didn’t know the task was to build a bar, I would assume this was just a well build sci-fi room. And one last thing .. I love the duck :p
Deactivate!
Love the concept of a rundown/broken down space station bar, sprawling with foliage and mold. It’s almost as the aliens, placed all over the build, have taken over the bar for one final party before their demise. Love it! Even though the build tells a great story through the aliens and details, the overall structure seems too excessive. The best part for me is definitely the bar area, the rest of the room seems like a waste of space. It takes the focus of the gorgeous details of the bar area (window, door, stairs, bar cabinet, pipes). Also do be careful with the use of the pops of colour. On the first floor it doesn’t bother me, but on the other stories they create a too big contrast with the grey floor and wall for my liking.
C0RPSES
It's nice to see someone finally run with the fantasy theme and really make it their own. So many modern/sci-fi bars! It’s nice to see an untraditional bar that really stands alone. But your choice of theme is not the only good thing about this room. The stones that makes up the structure of the bar are stacked nicely and fit together very good! There is for sure a landscaper hidden inside of you. All though I would have liked to see something incorporated inside the stones, maybe an advertisement for the bar, or at least something to hold up all those heavy rocks (wooden beams fx.).
Congratulations ..Raymond on your second task win! You're expanding your horizons and really setting the bar high. Keep up the really great work. We very sadly bid adieu to janicetale. We are so thrilled to have had you in our cast for this season. You have shown tremendous talent in your journey. Showing everyone what you're made of. We know this isn't the end of the line for you, we can't wait to see what else you do to inspire our little community. Thanks for everything!